Score: 8

"Eh, T'was okay."

submission: Phoenix Awesome

date: August 5, 2008

It looks very nice and the egoraptor style is spon on. The only thing that lets it down is the humor. It dosent seem as fast paced... Also, I've never played pheonix wright so I don't understand the humor.

Next time, trya game everyone knows, other than that, I like, no, loved it. I'm impressed and want to see more!

~Karlos

8/10 - 5/5

Score: 7

"Good."

submission: The Preview 2

date: July 21, 2008

Alot better than number 1. For certain. The effects (Explosions, gunshots) are superb. It also nice to understand the soryline, I didn't know the last one was a preview to a film.

Areas to improve:
- Animation, try animate tohe people, moving
- Add some shading
- Nice use of subtitles!

Overall, a big improvement. Good work!

~Karlos

7/10 - 4/5

Score: 10

"Wow..."

submission: Actionscript Tutorial.

date: July 20, 2008

Well I be damned.

There actually exists and Actionscript tutorial that not only teaches you but also dosent mention the words "Copy and Paste"

Yup. The endis nigh.

~Karlos

10/10 - 5/5 + Fav

Score: 7

"Nice."

submission: A Day To Die 2

date: July 15, 2008

I like it. However, here are some possible areas to improve. Before I move onto that. I'd just likke to say its good to see someone who is enthusiastic to improve!

Anyway, areas to improve:
-Make the animation more fluid. It seems very stiff.
-Don't re-use sound effects as ofter
-Put more time in the backgrounds

I gess that it for now, other than that, its good work. If you ever want any help with anything such as backgrounds, dont hesitate to message me... Overall, good work and keep it up!

~Karlos

7/10 - 3/5

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: MOAPAC - Episode 1

date: July 15, 2008

It's like a mix between an animated series called Clock sucker and also Edds world :P

Nice work, I like it. The only thing that can be improved is the storyline =D

Good luck and good work!

~Karlos

9/10 - 5/5

Score: 2

"Uh..."

submission: Direction Dog

date: July 11, 2008

My problems with this:

-It makes no sence
-The language... What is it?
-The dog dosent help you
-It's confusing

Really...

~Karlos

2/10 - 1/5

Score: 3

"Again..."

submission: Beginer PHP Tutorial 2

date: July 10, 2008

Again, the music was too distracting and there was no set order in which to view these. The graphics sucked too.

Next time, spend more time in explaining the code rather than writing it, expecting everyone to understand.

I may try actually making a tutorial to show how it done =p

Good luck on the next one.

~Karlos

3/10 - 0/5

Score: 4

"As busted say..."

submission: Begginer HTML Tutorial

date: July 9, 2008

"Thats what I go to w3school for!!!" ~ Busted

Nah. You could of done alot better. They layout and color choise is pretty pathetic and the music is way too distracting. Try again.

-Better layout
-Soothing background music
-More info
-More advanced things
-Try put more effort into it

Good luck.

~Karlos

4/10 - 1/5

Score: 10

"Brilliant!"

submission: EW: Moving Targets

date: July 2, 2008

Front page stuff!

Brilliant humor, voice acting and graphics.

I love this! Serious well done!

~Karlos

5/5 - 10/10 + Fav

Score: 4

"Oddly enough..."

submission: RETRO PONG!

date: June 28, 2008

I enjoyed the title screen more than the game. Not being offensive. I really did O-o;...

Anyway, uh... Good job with the game. Love the titlescreen! =D

Kind Regards,

Karlos

2/5 - 4/10